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11:44:58 Jan 15th 08 - Mr. Bruiant: Bolts of lightning strike from the heavens above, shimmering across the waters. Crackling fires and black billowing smoke erupts from many of the thatch houses, burning them to their timber frames. Solid stone from siege equipment smashing into the enceinte, shaking the towers, crumbling the stone. The outer rings of the fortification fell hours ago, either a mass of rubble, or claimed by the ruthless oppressors. Villages beyond the walls are all smoldering remains, men butchered, women and children to be sold as slaves. Townspeople from the inner city rush for the safety of the cathedral, scattering livestock and chickens. The harbor city is a key.locationer, nestled on a hill towering over the nearby land, vast fields of lush green grass, and cultivated fields of crops. Deep watered ports, clear water usually reflecting the suns golden beams, but tonight, scarlet flames and the flashes of lightning. Arrows whirl over the heads of Knights and sergeants followed by a series of curses as they get suppressed. Mangonels push forward and harder, catapulting round after round of crudely shaped rock into the heart of the city, sending shards of stone and woodwork flying. A small team of 3 knights and 4 sergeants huddled into two towers gather swords and shields in a haste to get off the battlements. Horns sound from nearby towers, signaling a breach into the enceinte, alerting fellow knights of the danger. iv never posted in the Roleplaying thread before. any feedback would be much appreciated. the story is based about the pious order, the Knights Templars. the city which is facing its demise is just a figment of my imaginaton, and bears no resemblance to any real city, unless its just pure coincidence. i do have more, but i just wondered what people thought of this.
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17:03:02 Jan 15th 08 - Mr. Posi: i Readed it before its nice.xD | ||||
00:37:10 Jan 26th 08 - Mr. Meowman: cant b bothered to read these stories, i just come to roleplaying to roleplay, lol. But the paraagraph i red sounded good... good feelin in them. | ||||
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