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I am writing a book : )
21:09:01 Feb 19th 07 - Sir Mac:

Sounding good so far Arzun.


Keep it up ;)

21:15:18 Feb 19th 07 - Lord Erunion Telcontar:

With elves, are they Tolkien immortal, or just long lived???


21:36:08 Feb 19th 07 - Mr. Arzun:

I havn't deceided about the elves. And there are the basic races with a few twists you will see if you read it : )

Elves, Dwarves, Men, Orc, Minotaur, and some ones I will make up : )


21:39:57 Feb 19th 07 - Mr. Vertencio:

Yes, definitely make some up, kind of like a race of mythological creatures that didn't make the cut. Just add wings to some animals and change their names.

Lions + Wings = Gryffin
Horse + Wings = Pegasus
Hawk + Wings = Double Hawk

you get the idea. Or even better, give them human heads.


Or just make some entirely random ones with like an elephant nutsack and dolphin head on Porshe wheels called Lipforanumous.

Yeahhhh..
that's the stuff.


22:28:48 Feb 19th 07 - Lord Erunion Telcontar:

Oh great and powerful Arzun,

I think High Lord of the elves would be better than king, but thats just my opinion, and is just a maybe, but more importantly than that, when my character meets Senturu, perhaps I would call him Sentaru, and he would get annoyed, etc? That happened a while back... Agree Sentaru? :P


22:34:54 Feb 19th 07 - Mr. Arzun:

Ya I ended up calling you both :P

And that's not a bad idea, seeing as you are arogentish :P


22:38:28 Feb 19th 07 - Sir Mac:

Arzun, you could use my name. As it is short, I have added the second half on so that you could use it.

Macatov

Would be pleased to be a Minotaur General, who either gets killed off in the end, or flees when his army is destroyed and comes back in the sequal. :P



22:40:10 Feb 19th 07 - Lord Erunion Telcontar:

*Fries Macatov* I do hope maging is available, if not, *shoots Macatov*...


22:43:48 Feb 19th 07 - Lord Erunion Telcontar:

Hmmm... Efrandor should be unable to stop talking....


23:05:39 Feb 19th 07 - Lord Mielo:

Macatov ???

 ... it's like a scottish lad that is trying to act real russian ... and also a bit mexican ... I give it an 2.5/10

edit: wops not the rate the name thread

(Edited by Lord Mielo 2/19/2007 11:06:04 PM)


23:12:25 Feb 19th 07 - Mr. Killer King:

lol mielo

arzun you should have like a main guy for each race. The orc guy should be my name for next era(Killstone).

Also jsut say if you dont want people helping you cause i would be very annoyed if people did that to me =P


23:14:42 Feb 19th 07 - Mr. Arzun:

No I apreciate all the help. If it ever gets published I would have a big shoutout to VU and everyone in it : )


23:17:55 Feb 19th 07 - Lord Mielo:

And I'm the *beep*ty romanticus ^^ could life be any better ?


23:25:41 Feb 19th 07 - Lord Erunion Telcontar:

*Watches as the womens circle of the village chases Mielo out in an attempt to kill him and protect their daughters....*

"Don't worry Mielo, your funeral is already payed for...."


23:48:57 Feb 19th 07 - Sir Senturu:

*starts slapping ET around*

my name is SentUru not SentAru


23:53:43 Feb 19th 07 - Lord Mielo:

*Watches as SentUru circle of the village chases Erunion Telcontar out in an attempt to kill him and protect their daughters....*

"Don't worry Erunion Telcontar, your funeral is already payed for...."


23:59:37 Feb 19th 07 - Lord Erunion Telcontar:

*Teleports*


00:00:35 Feb 20th 07 - Lord Mielo:

waaaaackkkk ... spell failed ... you lost all your mages and magic abilities ^^ ... Unluckeh mistah bonde


00:00:50 Feb 20th 07 - Lord Erunion Telcontar:

Are you implying that there is more than one Senturu, and that they have daughters!?!?!?!?  Senturu, is this true, or is this just a figment of Mielo's imagination???


00:01:43 Feb 20th 07 - Lord Erunion Telcontar:

"Fortunatly I have long legs..." *Starts running far, far, away....*


00:02:15 Feb 20th 07 - Mr. Vertencio:

*Watches a beautiful sunset spanning across the eastern horizon*

"Don't worry Vertencio, your ticket to the insane asylum has already been paid for..."





*beep*... the sun sets in the west...


01:19:41 Feb 20th 07 - Mr. Roman Paladin:

uhmm... i could draw u a map but id have to come up with most of it because i cant get much off of this can u plaz like tell me what u want in the south or in the north like give me a base line of what u want on it and ill do it for free(as long as you put my name in the book =))

or just call me paladin horons=)


(Edited by Mr. Roman Paladin 2/20/2007 1:21:35 AM)


01:23:04 Feb 20th 07 - Mr. Roman Paladin:

and also for the map id need you to tell me the names of the citys

or right me the whole story and send it to me then i can write you up a map k?


(Edited by Mr. Roman Paladin 2/20/2007 1:23:46 AM)


01:29:57 Feb 20th 07 - Mr. Vertencio:

Paladin, the previous pages have details on the look of the map, and there aren't any city names provided as of yet. Arzun just wants to see a basic outline of the map of his world, and a promise that you'll add more detail.



01:32:59 Feb 20th 07 - Mr. Roman Paladin:

Mr. Vertencio


2/19/2007 9:39:57 PM
Yes, definitely make some up, kind of like a race of mythological creatures that didn't make the cut. Just add wings to some animals and change their names.

Lions + Wings = Gryffin
Horse + Wings = Pegasus
Hawk + Wings = Double Hawk

you get the idea. Or even better, give them human heads.

 

ill name you a few mystical creatures and u dont got to use em all

gryffin's

pegasus

banshee's

basilisk's

centaur's

demon's(u probly no what this is)

drangon's(same)

fairy's

ghoul's

giant's

gnome's

goblin's

leprechaun's

magician's

MERLIN(hes not a creature but hes a good ass charecture)

PHEONIX's

sphinx's

uhmm...what about that three headed dog from harry-pothead

troll's

unicorn's(i sujest u use these if u want to attract little girls)

vampire's

were-wolf's

witche's

wizard's

yeti's

zombie's

I think that shuld be enough lol


(Edited by Mr. Roman Paladin 2/20/2007 1:34:27 AM)


01:35:49 Feb 20th 07 - Mr. Werner Von Fritsch:

hum this writing sounds allot like war god his writing for example 'PHEONIX' (Peon ???)


01:36:08 Feb 20th 07 - Mr. Roman Paladin:

and uhmm...ok


01:36:53 Feb 20th 07 - Mr. Roman Paladin:

pheonix is a legendary bird of flames and if u havnt heard of 1 im srry

and whos wargod?


(Edited by Mr. Roman Paladin 2/20/2007 1:37:10 AM)


04:28:09 Feb 21st 07 - Mr. Vertencio:

Wargod is who you used to be confused with, they almost accused YOU and Wargod for being multis.

And at one point Visual Utopia thought you two were brothers.

anyway, everyone disliked Wargod for quite a while.


05:26:41 Feb 21st 07 - Mr. Fuego Walker:

I don't know what a drangon is?

Don't know about harry-potty-head but isn't the 3-head dog named ceberus?

daemon>demon

don't add too many mythological creatures, that would be a real pain to read if it ever got published, and I really don't prefer to see certain ones like leperchauns and pegasus, those don't match with the other creatures.


06:12:46 Feb 21st 07 - Mr. Vertencio:

yeah, Paladin was only giving him a list of races.

I'm sure Arzun'll be content with what he has.

But it'd be AWESOME if he had a race of Satyrs, led by me... perhaps?

haha jk jk



22:23:46 Feb 21st 07 - Mr. Arzun:

Any maps for mer :D

And I think I will make Killstone an orc. A high ranking one as well. Maybe King Killstone of an orc tribe?


22:45:53 Feb 21st 07 - Lord Erunion Telcontar:

High Chief Killstone, of the Dead Rocks Tribe. Perhaps? 


22:47:26 Feb 21st 07 - Mr. Arzun:

Oooh not bad :O

I'll brainstorm. I am actually gonna wright Krum's part right now because I was listening to a song and it just came to me :D


22:51:09 Feb 21st 07 - Lord Erunion Telcontar:

If it wasn't so shamelessly obvious, his top warrior should have been named Rocky....


03:43:58 Feb 23rd 07 - Mr. Killer King:

sorry man im not putting names in it il lget it to you ug i need to get my dad to fix the scanner... =\

hmmm ill ask him right now if hes too tired ill have him do it tommorrow night and i wil lget it to you sunday afternoon at the altest incase something comes up sorry man!

and i like the killstone guy =D

and i ile the name ET =P

the eilte orc warriors could be called... The boulders or something like that cause they have to be tall and strong to be there =P


03:46:03 Feb 23rd 07 - Mr. Killer King:

dads asleep =\

going away tommorow so he will be tired so mabye sunday... ill do it soon though dont worry its all amde and everything


02:51:42 Feb 27th 07 - Mr. Killstone:

alright here it is finally! lets see if i can attach it...


02:52:44 Feb 27th 07 - Mr. Killstone:

kinda big sorry but it was the best way to see everything... and sorry all the words are kinda weird =P


02:57:47 Feb 27th 07 - Sir Arzun:

I can't see it : (

Use photobucket


03:41:06 Feb 27th 07 - Mr. Killstone:

crap...


03:42:06 Feb 27th 07 - Mr. Killstone:

ill try a word thing i dont want to figure out how to transfer it and were photobucket is =P

didnt work for me but did it work for you?


(Edited by Mr. Killstone 2/27/2007 3:43:26 AM)


03:44:53 Feb 27th 07 - Sir Arzun:

No : (

E-mail it to

mitch_mcgra@hotmail.com


01:33:21 Mar 3rd 07 - Mr. Killstone:

sent it man =D


04:20:17 Mar 3rd 07 - Mr. Atreides:

Well, good luck writing the book!


04:26:35 Mar 3rd 07 - Sir Arzun:

Wow thank you Killston :D

You took in every detail I gave and put in into the map :D

It has everything I said, even the exact length I was thinking.

Nice work!


08:14:58 Mar 3rd 07 - Mr. Vertencio:

Did you write my part in the book yet?

























hmm?


only kidding


14:40:25 Mar 3rd 07 - Mr. Killstone:

feel free to move stuff around or change anything that is jsut a rough sketch of waht you said

and btw the dotted line tahts the border is the end of the empire to the west of that is where the empire is the sacarians are in the desert like you said and you said the rebellion is hidden

you might want to make the map a bit bigger too to make the frozen part more then like 3 miles above the plain and like 20 miules above the desert ;)


19:16:45 Mar 3rd 07 - Duke Sobek:

you could use my new name ;) ... it's more RP-lic ...


20:51:37 Mar 3rd 07 - Sir Arzun:

I will make you sone of Mielo :D


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