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19:16:58 Jan 22nd 08 - Mr. Vengence:
[18:15] Sir Revenge: No
[18:15] Mr. Mittalmar: lol
[18:15] Mr. Vengence: THIS PROVES WE ARE NOT MULTIS!!!!!!!
[18:15] Mr. Vengence: FINALLY!
WHUPEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
CHAMPANGE!
NOW YOU DO NOT HAVE A REASON TO CALL US MULTIS, WE WERE ON THE CHAT AT THE SAME TIME!
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19:32:35 Jan 22nd 08 - Mr. Lelouch:
That's nothing special, I could be on the chat with two accounts on the same computer even.
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19:41:06 Jan 22nd 08 - Mr. Fire Nova:
no you cant its impossible to be on two accounts on the same computer
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19:42:26 Jan 22nd 08 - Mr. Vengence:
lelouch, that is not possible. you would get a one hour ban.
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19:43:52 Jan 22nd 08 - Sir Revenge:
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19:49:43 Jan 22nd 08 - Mr. Vengence:
cause i read it. cant remember were, just remember I did.
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20:40:28 Jan 22nd 08 - Sir Iwasfrozen VI:
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20:48:45 Jan 22nd 08 - Lord Seloc:
Experience is the best teacher ^_^. As for chat Laptops.
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22:33:23 Jan 22nd 08 - Sir Gaius Aureliae:
This only proves you are multis! Kill them both!
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00:55:27 Jan 23rd 08 - Sir Dead Oralive:
*Kills Sir Gaius Aureliae instead*
oops wrong person
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04:38:50 Jan 23rd 08 - Mr. Virtus:
no you cant its impossible to be on two accounts on the same computer
Are you sure about that?
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23:15:07 Jan 24th 08 - Mr. Ding:
why doesn't some1 try! then u are a multi, kill them!!!!!
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23:19:40 Jan 26th 08 - Mr. Xalto:
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08:26:25 Jan 27th 08 - Sir Revenge:
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23:54:11 Jan 27th 08 - Mr. Stickman The Creator:
can i get a link to the VU chat thing?
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18:33:17 Jan 29th 08 - Mr. Blah Blah The Brutal:
The "chat" button at the top of the map :o
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19:48:10 Jan 29th 08 - Mr. Crissxcross:
no multi ???
doesn't matter kill them anyway :)
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21:13:16 Jan 29th 08 - Sir Gaius Aureliae:
I can prove this is in no way proof enough to believe they are not multis!
[18:15] Sir Gaius: No
[18:15] Mr. Gaius: lol
[18:15] Mr. Gaius: THIS PROVES WE ARE NOT MULTIS!!!!!!!
[18:15] Mr. Gaius: FINALLY!
See! It can be easily changed....which means: THEY ARE MULTIS!!!
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23:19:00 Jan 29th 08 - Lord Verll:
Mr. Lelouch
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1/22/2008 7:32:35 PM | That's nothing special, I could be on the chat with two accounts on the same computer even.
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Hey, it's true! Don't ask how I know, it's classified ^-^
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04:41:30 Jan 30th 08 - Mr. Goldsie:
It is more then possible people... Proxy anyone?
Anyway, you could have just edited that text in word or another such text program
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11:51:40 Jan 30th 08 - Duke Efrandor:
Let's find this out old school style! Burn them, if they survive they are indeed multis, should they die from their injuries they are innocent.
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02:07:44 Feb 8th 08 - Mr. Arvious IIII:
*gets torch*
I'm just kidding Vengence.
They are NOT multis:
1. Vengence is smart.
2. Revenge is the dumbest person on earth
3. vengence hasn't read Dragon Egg lately. WHY!?!
here is some real proof you can check. They have two different views...
Mr. Vengence
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1/21/2008 7:42:07 AM |
dont have time now, will read later. |
Mr. Arvious III
1/21/2008 8:48:41 AM |
I just relized that I made a whole lot of typoes in the prolouge.
Should I prcatice ekyboredig?
:-) |
Sir Revenge
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1/21/2008 9:24:17 AM |
Can you put me in it?
=]
Change my Name though too ' Gravenstone ' !! |
Mr. Arvious III
1/21/2008 9:26:46 AM |
This isn't that kind of story, but I'll make one like that today |
Mr. Vengence
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1/21/2008 9:38:10 AM |
This isn't that kind of story, but I'll make one like that today
Arvious, you should focus on getting one story done then move onto the next. that way you wil have a complete story, rather than two or three half finished ones.
about your story start.
a few things to add maybe. (I am trying to be exceptionally picky, so dont get annoyed. the more picky I am the better you will be at this)
firstly, the dialogue was well constructed. that was a good part of it.
things you could add:
Descriptions of the surrounding area- his home, the blacksmith. what do they look like? what is the atmoshere like? is it big, or small? are there a lot of people around?
things like this will give the reader a clearer picture of the scene you are depicting.
how does he feel when reading the note? excited? nervous? elated?
last thing is maybe you could do part of the conversation between his mother and father
that is all. ill sya again, being exceptionally picky in an attempt to mk u get better |
Mr. Arvious III
1/21/2008 9:45:34 AM |
For the first part: Dragon Egg (Comedy) is just people acting out the parts in the parts of the story I have written so far.
For the second part: Thanks for the compliment, I'm better at writting conversations than descibing things.
For the third part: What happens in the talk between Travis's mom and dad and the decribtion of the town comes in the third chapter.
For the fourth part: If you read the paragraph correctly, you'll see that Travis really wanted to be a soldier. Of course he's elated, excited.
For the fifth part: You are very picky. :-)
For the sixth part: There is no sixth. Weird!
P.S. I like pie!!! |
Mr. Vengence
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1/21/2008 10:07:50 AM |
yes I know.
But describe some of the feelings. like:
As Travis Read the message, his mind was churning. this was it! as he read his exctiemtngrew, with a tinge of nervousness mixed in. he was going to be a soldier!
things like that
P.S. IDk that you like pie! |
Lord Seloc
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1/21/2008 2:05:33 PM |
So why are we trying to copy Eragon? |
Mr. Vengence
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1/21/2008 2:07:09 PM |
Seloc, you could show some support, he is trying. |
Lord Seloc
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1/21/2008 2:11:11 PM |
lol Vengence the only reason I'm here is because I hear you been acting the role of "RP master", which doesn't suit you. "Annoying *beep*mer" is more your style.
Anyway is it an exact rip off of Eragon. |
Mr. Arvious III
1/21/2008 2:16:07 PM |
Then you can't read Seloc!!! Anyone with an intelligent brain can tell the differnces!!! Get out of here!!! |
Sir Revenge
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1/21/2008 2:30:59 PM |
I have to agree with Seloc! |
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03:22:08 Feb 8th 08 - Sir Pesterd:
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15:59:59 Feb 8th 08 - Prince Calus Septim V:
Sir Revenge
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1/22/2008 11:43:52 AM |
How do you know ?? O.o? |
Mr. Revengicus
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2/8/2008 4:18:48 AM |
*revengicus steps in with the biggest shotgun*
*asta lovista baby!*
*shoots everyone (except pesterd) in the head and blows all of their heads off then burns their bodies so there is no possible way of returning*
*sorry im late boss :)* |
Hmmmmmmmmm...
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00:33:01 Feb 9th 08 - Mr. Arvious IIII:
Yeah, that sort of proves Vengences and My therory...
Revenge is dumb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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01:07:59 Feb 9th 08 - Lord Seloc:
lol Arvious is dumb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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01:09:27 Feb 9th 08 - Mr. Arvious IIII:
*grabs gun and shoots Seloc again in Ye Olde Tavern*
DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay guys, who wants to have a vote on this, is he a multi or not?
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01:22:55 Feb 9th 08 - Duke Indicated Undernourishment:
Just burn them already! Witches, witches, witches!!
Correction: Multis, multis, multis!! Euhm...
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01:52:48 Feb 9th 08 - Mr. Arvious IIII:
One vote for multi, one vote (me) for not
anyone else want to vote
*puts away torch*
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03:53:39 Feb 9th 08 - Prince Calus Septim V:
Those weren't in the same thread, but the names...they are worse than Vengence and Revenge. I don't think Revengicus is Vengence because Vengence claims to have a busted computer.
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04:07:31 Feb 9th 08 - Mr. Link:
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Most Powerful Rulers |
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[Link] Link's KD
With Mr. Link as leader.
[Link3] Link's Other KD
With Mr. Link III as leader.
[Link2] THE REAL Link's KD
With Mr. Link II as leader.
[Burn HIM!] Link's a Multi!
With Mr. Dumbass as leader.
[LDK] The Great Duchy of Lithuania
With Duke Vytautas Didysis as leader.
[Abydos] Abydos
With Dark Lord Osiris as leader.
[PKS] Peacekeepers
With Sir Grim Darkhammer as leader.
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With Duke Drakos as leader.
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Mr. Link
Member of: Brotherhood of the Wolf.
Mr. Link II
Member of: Carnage.
Mr. Link III
Member of: Legacy.
Mr. Link IV
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Mr. Link V
Member of: Legacy.
Mr. Killstone The Exploiter
Member of: Phi Factor.
Mr. Spraitas
Member of: The Great Duchy of Lithuania.
Mr. Vexsloth
Member of: Abydos.
Mr. Grimdeath
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Mr. Osmosis
Member of: Dark Fires.
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I HAVE 5 MULTI ACCOUNTS ALL ON FANT!!!!!!!! OH NO YOU CAUGHT ME!!!!!!!!!! CRAP NOW YOU'RE GONNA BURN ME!!!!!!!
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13:47:40 Feb 9th 08 - Sir Vengence:
3. vengence hasn't read Dragon Egg lately. WHY!?!
oops, forgot about that. and thanks arvious.
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16:26:49 Feb 9th 08 - Mr. Arvious IIII:
@Vengence:It's alright...
@Septim: 2 votes no multi, 1 vote multi BURN!!!
@Link: "GET THE TORCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
*grabs torch*
"BURN, BURN,BURNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
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