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Shadow Heroes
20:15:13 Jan 20th 10 - Mr. Belgrium The Believer:

The struggle between good and evil has been going on since the beginning of time. The evil side has had a single purpose and it is destroying and spreading misery. They have been up close to reaching its goals, but they were prevented by the Shadows, Heroes. They are warriors whose only goal is to defend and defeat the evil and restore the earth , they emerge when the earth is threatened, and then disappear as suddenly as they came. Now approaching their time again, for it is time for yet another battle between the two powers.



Fate's wheels rolsl again.....................

Impatiently he walked around in the dark hall in anticipation of helpers which he sent through the portal to Adrieon. In the year he was imprisoned in a bleak and desolate dimension. Dimension which was without lights and joy that only bestådd of eternal darkness in an endless world. He can still remember the time he went around to explore the dimension until he has been single dimension being. A creature which he felt was unique that does not even have its like the other five dimensions, not even in drakdimensionen Alroila. Being champion he became, by measuring its shadow. With the help of the creature will be chaos, he finally shed in Adrieon not even close to what he intends to do. Even today, remembers his hatred of the four who stopped him and detained him, creating dimension. Alroila, Adrieon, Argorth and Arliven thought just wait you will serve me even though you are dead. He was so lost in his thoughts that he had not noticed that the handy was in place and that they have the right to Adrieon. Slowly, he turned to the portal opening, which he created and asked;
"Is everybody in place?" He hissed. "Yes, your highness" he got in response. "Hear and obey your worthless creep, find and destroy them while they are defenseless," and so he continued still facing the four dark-clad figures who stared back at him from the other side of the portal. "What are you waiting for, go and destroy them." "Do not disappoint me, otherwise, yes you can imagine what will happen to you" and so he looked down at his shadow that seemed to have a life of its own. It seemed like it had the same wicked smile even more wicked than its owner. With one hand he sweeps closed portal. Malius turned back and walked slowly to his throne and sat down, closed his eyes and he cried out into the dark hallway of the six demo lords that he created out of darkness. Anyone with enough power to destroy a mountain with a single hand sweep.
"Septimus, Akron, Bearcon, Tenbrion, Medusa and Dreagul, he shouted" belongs to my call and came to me. " Out of nothing came the slow up, the prince of darkness embraced by eternal darkness. From the darkness listening to his master and the king's command. Like shadows, the silent and motionless, and as stone.
"I want you to look for the portal's keys," said he looked down on from his throne. "I will open the damned portal and unleash my loyal supporters," he said with madness shining from his eyes. He stretched out his hand and focused on. His hand began to shine and out of nothing, especially princes created Malius the six bracelets, which would help the to find the keys. "Take these bracelets, and go find the keys. You soon notice that your forces have redoubled" he said.
"Go and find me reagealens keys. Slowly but gracefully moved back into the darkness. . A single sentence uttered before the mad king demo fell back his thoughts. "Soon, we will show them darkness and you me friend will  devour my enemies  he  said  friendly towards his shadow.

 

I am currently writing for the school is me last project so am wondering if u ugys can say what u think of this piece that  i wrote:)

 

ps i used google translate if u guys notice anything wrong with the story :)


20:21:55 Jan 20th 10 - Mr. Belgrium The Believer:

lol somethink is wrong with this


19:21:33 Jan 22nd 10 - Lord Himanilviii:

I did think that we could see the white parts.

Anyway where's the sadistic laughter? Kidding. Be careful of the name *lowers voice to whisper* Septimus though, there roams a dangerous emperor about these forums.

Well as for the writing, some discrepancies perhaps in that certain parts might not be as deirably clear as one might perhaps wish for them to be so.

 


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