i wrote a song

i wrote a song
15:24:25 Aug 4th 10 - Mr. Erobos: If you like hip hop or rap take a listen, let me know what you think. It;s not the greatest quality, recorded with a laptop mic haha. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PB1v5wsQynk ">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PB1v5wsQynk " type="application/x-shockwave-flash" wmode="transparent" width="425" height="350">
15:30:39 Aug 4th 10 - Sir Horus VIII: The beats sound like the most mediocre average blah I've heard. A decent rapper could make anythign interesting, but you my friend, are not a decent rapper. You should start an emo band, post a link to that, and let me make fun of your wrist scars. I'm usually not this mean, but holy sh!t... I'm never getting back the 30 secs I gave to your crap song... I am however getting mild pleasure out of putting a stop to you wasting your time. Go find something you are good at, like prostitution
15:44:06 Aug 4th 10 - Mr. Erobos: You're just a hater, :) and I don't care what hatas think. You're one of the losas im rappin about
15:47:29 Aug 4th 10 - Mr. Erobos: Oh and by the way that song I recorded over was #1 clubbing song in 2009 called Imma Put It on Her LyrIcs CHORUS: im killin it this evenin lemme show you that i mean it been known to get the green i feel like i really need it got so much paper that your mind could not perceive it and if you tryna get at mine best believe i'll leave ya bleedin i'm winnin all the time yeah you know i'm undefeated megatron money ye need optimus to defeat it killa killa on this beat them hatas misbelievin they hopin and wishin that they just asleep dreamin well sorry to disappoint ya but nah you ain't sleepin this is real life and the crown is mine i just claimed it VERSE 1 imagination is more important than knowledge, haters dont forget that while you tryna pay for college spit my flow so sick, you know i had to get it spotted spittin this ish so quick, its like i got you all tongue knotted haha I'm the king, you know I'm never unguarded you tryna come at me? blunt trauma blood clotted lurkin under the radar, got you laser scope dotted gettin atcha supa quick like a corpse already rotted yee you could call me the necro, hetero, sexual yo chick is supa flexible beindin every which way baby girl so bendable sexy face, sexy body baby girl so beddable gettin kinda hungry baby girl lookin edible tie her to the bed and pretend to be hannibal she say she like it rough as long as im sensible want me to do anything that i can to her
17:10:58 Aug 4th 10 - Sir Horus VIII: 09:44:06 Aug 4th 10 - *Mr. Erobos*: You're just a hater, :) and I don't care what hatas think. You're one of the losas im rappin about Stop destroying the english language As for your chorus, congradulations, you can rhyme a long I and a long E. "she say she like it rough as long as im sensible" - just lol The 20 year plan to destroy english: For example, in Year 1 that useless letter "c" would be dropped to be replased either by "k" or "s", and likewise "x" would no longer be part of the alphabet. The only kase in which "c" would be retained would be the "ch" formation, which will be dealt with later. Year 2 might reform "w" spelling, so that "which" and "one" would take the same konsonant, wile Year 3 might well abolish "y" replasing it with "i" and Iear 4 might fiks the "g/j" anomali wonse and for all. Jenerally, then, the improvement would kontinue iear bai iear with Iear 5 doing awai with useless double konsonants, and Iears 6-12 or so modifaiing vowlz and the rimeining voist and unvoist konsonants. Bai Iear 15 or sou, it wud fainali bi posibl tu meik ius ov thi ridandant letez "c", "y" and "x" -- bai now jast a memori in the maindz ov ould doderez -- tu riplais "ch", "sh", and "th" rispektivli. Fainali, xen, aafte sam 20 iers ov orxogrefkl riform, wi wud hev a lojikl, kohirnt speling in ius xrewawt xe Ingliy-spiking werld.
17:12:11 Aug 4th 10 - Ms. Lindsey Lohan: i dont beleive such a good rapper would ever play vu. where can i buy your album?
17:13:20 Aug 4th 10 - Sir Horus VIII: At the talent show portion of the special olympics
17:19:26 Aug 4th 10 - Ms. Lindsey Lohan: LOL
17:29:29 Aug 4th 10 - Mr. Petite Penois: haha. Erobos = super troll
18:38:28 Aug 4th 10 - Sir Horus VIII: i don't believe this is a troll.... i'm afraid he is serious
18:48:16 Aug 4th 10 - Mr. Vuggy The Annoying Bastard: OMFG your voice is SUPER fucking annoying. If I had a choice between punching babies and listening to your music, I'd punch the babies with a brass knuckle. You have to actually have a voice that isn't ANNOYING AS FUCKING SHIT to be good at rapping, to start with, and your lyrics can't be SHIT. Fuck you. Fuck you. Fuck you.
20:30:12 Aug 4th 10 - Mr. Shawty: I sing if it counts for anything ... but idont rap tho haha this an original song me and my brother made lol ... so lemme know what yall think ">" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" wmode="transparent" width="425" height="350">
20:36:17 Aug 4th 10 - General Zondervan: Lol you are WAY better than the rapper guy.
20:42:23 Aug 4th 10 - Mr. Shawty: lmao ... why thank you General Zondervan :)
21:07:01 Aug 4th 10 - General Zondervan: Im assuming you are in teh white shirt on the left. The other guys seemed like they forgot what to sing lol
23:58:11 Aug 4th 10 - Mr. Nutty: lol, way way better then the rapper dude. 2 thumbs up
01:27:21 Aug 5th 10 - Mr. Mielo: Can I book you? It's wilber's slumberparty soon. PM me
02:18:57 Aug 5th 10 - Mr. Erobos: ">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-fKNmhd8YQA " type="application/x-shockwave-flash" wmode="transparent" width="425" height="350">' this ones for all you hatas. " type="application/x-shockwave-flash" wmode="transparent" width="425" height="350">
02:20:00 Aug 5th 10 - Mr. Vuggy The Annoying Bastard: I'm sorry that the song hurt my ears so much that I stopped it within 2 seconds and thought it was a rap. Nonetheless, a giant serving of suckage.
02:34:41 Aug 5th 10 - Mr. Erobos: it is a rap tard, get passed the chorus. i know it sounds bad it was recorded on a laptop microphone so obviously its not going to sound good, but whatevs. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-fKNmhd8YQA ">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-fKNmhd8YQA " type="application/x-shockwave-flash" wmode="transparent" width="425" height="350">
02:54:59 Aug 5th 10 - Toaster Struddle: lol
03:36:38 Aug 5th 10 - Mr. Shawty: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M8D8C25EEEs ">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M8D8C25EEEs " type="application/x-shockwave-flash" wmode="transparent" width="425" height="350">
04:34:08 Aug 5th 10 - Mr. Vuggy The Annoying Bastard: Whatever the fuck it is, quit changing the fucking story, it sucked. I sing if it counts for anything ... but idont rap tho haha this an original song me and my brother made lol ... so lemme know what yall think
04:56:19 Aug 5th 10 - Mr. Shawty: haha hater ... lets see you sing
06:31:32 Aug 5th 10 - Sir Horus VIII: i feel is my duty to as a human being to encourage you NOT to pursue rapping... even in your free time... alone
06:42:23 Aug 5th 10 - Mr. Arthur Zonds Fav: What are you talking about Horus? That was the most amazing song I've ever heard! It was like a river of delicious milk-chocolate for my ears to bask in. Too back I'm lactose-intolerant :(
06:46:19 Aug 5th 10 - Duke Some Fcked Dude: hahaha and awww my post got deleted :'(
06:55:45 Aug 5th 10 - Mr. Shawty: idk but *Mr. Vuggy The Annoying Bastard* is hate'n on my singing ... and i'm not even rapping ... mayb he's *Mr. Erobos* on another account ;)
07:43:10 Aug 5th 10 - Mr. Vuggy The Annoying Bastard: 12:48:16 Aug 4th 10 - Mr. Vuggy The Annoying Bastard: OMFG your voice is SUPER fucking annoying. If I had a choice between punching babies and listening to your music, I'd punch the babies with a brass knuckle. You have to actually have a voice that isn't ANNOYING AS FUCKING SHIT to be good at rapping, to start with, and your lyrics can't be SHIT. Fuck you. Fuck you. Fuck you. Before you even posted in here dipshit. I've been talking to Erobos the whole time. You, you need a different kind of background. You don't fit the ukulele sound IMO.
08:12:05 Aug 5th 10 - Mr. Shawty: all poly's fit the ukulele backround imo ... yu wouldnt know your not POLY! ha
14:12:37 Aug 5th 10 - Mr. Mielo:
15:32:18 Aug 5th 10 - Mr. Vuggy The Annoying Bastard: But you're not him.
15:48:52 Aug 5th 10 - Clown Wankin Between Ticks: me singing here
16:48:30 Aug 5th 10 - Mr. Mielo: gawd, 100% same as the original song ...
23:15:41 Aug 5th 10 - Mr. Vuggy The Annoying Bastard: Mielo... I just want to kiss you... except, I don't think so. Maybe my ears aren't the same what they used to be from listening to music so loud... Oh well. So worth it.
06:22:17 Aug 6th 10 - Mr. Shawty: Just goes to prove my point, yu dont know squat shit about POLY's ... POLY = Polynesians as in the people ... inever sai iwas Polly, but i did say iwas Poly ;)
16:00:32 Aug 6th 10 - Mr. Vuggy The Annoying Bastard: You're p00r.
16:08:00 Aug 6th 10 - Dr. Evil Smevil: Not bad Shawty Worlds better than that (sic) rap by what's his/her name
17:15:58 Aug 6th 10 - Duke Some Fcked Dude: poly is multying :P
03:49:42 Aug 7th 10 - Mr. Shawty: her name is *Mr. Erobos* haha
04:00:53 Aug 7th 10 - Ice Prince Zephyr: wtf is a little bit cool but sucks but cool
07:19:34 Aug 7th 10 - Mr. Vuggy The Annoying Bastard: SFD is multi'ing worse.
08:03:43 Aug 7th 10 - Duchess Sexxy Minx: OP - that is the worst rap i've ever heard, and i've heard some pretty shit rap.
14:40:41 Aug 7th 10 - Lady Lovely Emily: Fuck you Mielo!
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