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The Saga of Ragnarr Ragnarrson
14:14:41 Jun 10th 08 - Lord Ragnarr:

[ This is the story of Ragnarr's heir, based on what really and offiacially happens to Ragnarr (and his heir), according to an old story I wrote with the help of Septim a long time ago. This story is a continuation of the one we wrote. ]

“She is a beauty, isn’t she?” spoke Borys.

“Aye,” replied Ragnarr Ragnarrson.

She was before them, at the docks, anchored and stationed, fresh out of the shipyard, still smelling of the forest, with new ropes and a clean sail, pale planks and a graceful figurehead at the front, showing a leaping wolf. Ragnarrson’s longship was finally complete.

“How are you going to call her?” asked Borys.

“Nordvarg.”

“Northern wolf… I’m not surprised there.”

Ragnarr Ragnarrson smiled. They began construction on the Nordvarg on the autumn of last year, and continued through out the whole winter, and now, in the blossoms of spring, and the melting of snow, she was ready, waiting in the port, calling him to sail off.

And that was all Ragnarr Ragnarrson wanted to do – sail off, leave behind these lands of Slavyarus and return to the Northern lands, to continue his killed father’s legacy. He had a blood feud to see to.

He was told he looked exactly like his father – tall and strong, with long, straight, light blonde hair and icy blue eyes.

In fact, he had never seen his father, as Ragnarr Ragnarrson was born shortly after Ragnarr’s death. His father’s murder had resulted in the depression and desperation of his mother, who died moments after giving birth to him – he had come to this world in a trail of blood, and had to continue it.

He had been told the whole story just when he became twelve – the Sellenian empire combined several kingdoms - of which one was the Northern kingdom, his father’s -  into a mighty alliance under the rule of king Adoras, who had an iron fist and strong authority in rule. Adoras grew weak and old, and all his male heirs died in the Battle of Falconreach, and was left with a single daughter, Ayllera. He gathered all the lords of the empire to discuss and decide what is to be done, as he was soon going to be no more. Ragnarr was there, among the lords. There was a great treason done by Lord Thane and Lord Ballaron - who was in fact an old enemy of Ragnarr - in which most of the lords were killed, including the king himself. Ayllera was the next one to be eliminated, but, having survived the massacre, Ragnarr, and a great friend of his, Septim, managed to escape the city with her and a few other lords. After a lot of fightin*beep*llera was escorted safely to Septim’s capital of Cidel, where she gathered an army and took back the Imperial capital of Nerisella. However, before that, Ragnarr was captured in one of the many battles of escortin*beep*llera away from Nerisella and was beheaded publically as a traitor, being accused of the kidnapping of the king’s heir. Shortly after, the city was taken back by Ayllera and the united forces of lords - including Ragnarr’s great friend, Septim - and the traitor Lord Ballaron, was killed.

But that did not end the story. Mullendor, the kingdom of Lord Ballaron, rebelled and proclaimed itself as the leading kingdom – the house of Ballaron has always been full of arrogant southerners. That caused discontent among the other kingdoms, causing a quick break down of the Sellenian Empire, with Queen Ayllera unable to do much. Nerisella was besieged and the Northern lands attacked by Mullendor forces – the Winter Kingdom in the North was burnt down, its towns were leveled, its monuments destroyed, its force – eliminated. Only a few parts of the North remain independent still, yet they are in the deep, deep north, making occupation close to impossible. Nerisella resisted the siege, but its power was lost, and the unity had collapsed. The kingdoms were at a never ending war with each other.

Ragnarr Ragnarrson, being barely a year old, was taken under the wing of Lord Keldwind, who sailed away with his longship to the lands in the east – Slavyarus. Ragnarr’s son, Ragnarr Ragnarrson, was left there, or here, with friends of the house of Stormguard (the ruling house of the North) and grew up among these eastern people, not losing his northerner’s identity, but learning the ways of the people of Slavyarus as well.

He was now twenty. He had sailed all his life and had learned to yield a sword in northern fashion until perfection. He was determined to sail back to his lands.

[ More to be added soon, for more details about the official story for Ragnarr here is the link - http://visual-utopia.com/forum.asp?forum=9&topicID=41438&replyes=8 - as I said before, written by Septim and me. ]


17:54:43 Jun 10th 08 - Prince Bertilius Septim II:

What happened to my character, or my son, and Cidel? Hopefully you'll say! :-D. And it's looking good. Name my son in the story Validus Septim if you're going to include me.


18:02:14 Jun 10th 08 - Lord Ragnarr:

I wanted to include you, Septim, but I did not know if you would mind - now that I know you want to be in, I shall add you (: but this is going to be a bit long and some time will pass.


18:08:41 Jun 10th 08 - Prince Bertilius Septim II:

That's fine with me! :-D


18:10:40 Jun 10th 08 - Lord Erunion Telcontar:

Ragnarr, if for any reason you need an Elf with no ties to the local governments save that of friendship, you're welcome to use my character.
If you don't, I'll just enjoy reading your excellent looking RP.


18:12:37 Jun 10th 08 - Lord Ragnarr:

Usually my RPs have no other races other than human... but if I can I will add your character somehow, Erunion. And thanks for the compliment (:


18:15:43 Jun 10th 08 - Lord Erunion Telcontar:



18:52:53 Jun 10th 08 - Lord Ragnarr:

“Elena, girl, come here damn it!” spoke Borys loudly over the soft noise of the tavern and its visitors. They had entered the tavern by the docks, which they often visited, and knew almost everyone there – that was how it was in these lands, in a town, everyone knew everyone.

Elena, the barmaid, skillfully found her way through the cramped tavern and left two large mugs of dark ale. Before she turned away to serve ale to others, she gracefully winked to Borys, who then had a wide smile on his rough, yet friendly and pleasant face.

“You know I’m with you on this journey of yours…” he said.

“What? I thought we already went over this. You have a life here, you belong here. Why risk your life with me?” asked Ragnarr Ragnarrson surprised.

Borys took a long drink from his mug. “Hell, we grew up together, we are like brothers! Remember that time we were attacked by a bear in the forest? If we were not together, but separate, one of us would not be here.”

Ragnarr laughed. “That story with the bear always makes a good laugh.” He then drank half the contents of his mug.

“I can get a few other people I trust and know that are good sailors – around ten, fifteen lads.” Borys was nearly done with his ale.

“Good. I know a few friends that are descendants of northerners here who want to join me – they feel it is their duty to do so, since my father was Lord of the North, and are seeking a life of adventure.”

“Some adventure this will be – sounds more like a quick way to die.”

They both laughed over the remark, though they both knew it had a grain of truth in it. Ragnarr and Borys finished their drinks (they usually drank much more but it was the late morning, a bad time to get drunk) and Borys left a silver coin on the oak table, paying the price for the ale and leaving a large tip. They got out the tavern (which was called “Perunova Svetkavitsa”), and walked by the docks slowly.

“So when do you plan to leave?” asked Borys.

“As soon as possible – supplies are already being loaded on board the Nordvarg. And as soon as I have my crew – I’m leaving.”

“It will take me a week to get the lads I spoke about.”

“Same with me,” said Ragnarr Ragnarrson. “I also have to read through my father’s old runic scripts he left again – I might find something useful there…”

They spent the rest of the late morning in planning the journey. After they were done, they both went on their own ways to seek the crew they needed.

[ More to come soon. ]


19:00:18 Jun 10th 08 - Prince Bertilius Septim II:

Nice.


21:58:22 Jun 11th 08 - Lord Ragnarr:

“Leave the alcohol right there, by those barrels over there.” Ragnarr was amused – he already supplied the longship with enough for drinking, but almost every one of the sailors had brought some with him – whether it was a few bottles or a barrel.

“That is how they are,” said Borys, “but when it comes to duty, they do it well.”

Ragnarrson now had a crew of sixty-eight well armed sailors (and fighters), who were not as experienced, as most of them were not older than he himself was, for most of them were friends of his since childhood.

Borys had gathered twice more as he said he would – thirty-two Slavyarusians, all young and energetic sailors, with an exceptional ability to create a home-feeling and pleasant atmosphere anywhere around them, all eager to sail off. Most of them were from the port city they were in – Chernomor, which was in fact a mighty city, ruled by Knyaz Zhelezorukov – or the local country. They had little to leave behind and a lot awaiting them.

Ragnarr had gathered thirty-six northerners, or descendants of northerners, who were also mostly young and adventurous, lead by their will to see the world and the seas and follow Ragnarr Ragnarrson, heir of the true Northern lord.

The whole morning was spent in the last preparations of the journey and the settling of the new crew in the fresh new longship. By midday, the sky was in clouds, but the wind was strong and favorable. They were ready to leave.

“The Nordvarg will be our new home, lads,” spoke Ragnarr to his men, “so treat her well, and she will not let you down in the fiercest weather! We are heading to my homeland, but first we shall pass through the western lands were a great city Cidel lays. You will get your shares in anything we gain, and your payments will not be the only reward – adventure, experience, and the world lies before us! We shall be back to Slavyarus, I promise you, and we shall return rich and wealthy warriors!”

There was a joyful cheer. The ropes holding the Nordvarg at port were untied and taken in, and the stern was pushed away from the dock. The sail was stretched, catching a maximum amount of wind and pushing the longship swiftly through the waves on its first, maiden journey. She sailed smoothly and quickly, with great maneuverability and swiftness, using the powers of the mighty sea in its advantage.

The longship was sailing farther and farther away from Chernomor, and the clouds above broke out in a light, harmless rain.

“What happened with her?” Borys asked Ragnarr, noticing his quite emotionless face and guessing the matters were concerning a certain woman.

“I bid Raya farewell last night…” spoke Ragnarr Ragnarrson, still clutching the rudder oar with a strong hand, and touched his charm around his neck (Thor’s Hammer) with the other.

Borys nodded. “She didn’t accept your sudden news very well?”

Ragnarr had decided to tell her in the last moment, not to make more concerns for his beloved. “Not at all.”

“Just don’t worry about it – Elena was not too happy about this journey either, so I guess we’re even here. And I bet more than half the lads here have beloveds waiting for them back there.”

Ragnarr nodded and turned to look into the distance of the sea, as if we already saw their destination.

[ More to come soon. ]


22:36:18 Jun 12th 08 - Lord Ragnarr:

Sea for miles and miles. Wide, vast, and mighty – the wind roaring by, the waves crashing, the clouds hanging heavily above them, often breaking out into light rain. And even so, the sun did not fail to shine and the wind did not fail to bring them to the Cidellian Kingdom for just over a month sailing through the raging sea.

It was early morning when the longship Nordvarg entered the port of Cidel, which itself was a not part of Cidel, but in its outskirts. The sea haven was large and rich, a trading centre to which merchants from all of the parts of the world gathered to profit and make the Cidellian Kingdom prosper even more.

The Nordvarg found a place to dock at quickly somewhere in the southern part, farther away from the traders and the overcrowded market which was inevitably near to the sea. The ropes were thrown and the longship was stationed.

“We shall be staying here for four days. Guthorm and Ivan, you take care that the ship is resupplied with everything needed. Take as many people as you need. When you’re done, do whatever you want, but be back at the ship in four days. And before I leave, Thorbjorn, give out the crew’s payment.”

Ragnarr’s last comment caused few joyful remarks from the crew. He, Borys, Wulfhere and Alexi left the longship at the command of Ivan and Guthorm and headed into the market. They quickly bought four horses, which were not a fighting breed, nor very strong, but were good enough for travelling. They then headed into Cidel.

The capital of the Cidellian Kingdom was marvelous and awe-inspiring. Only the greatest architects have worked here, as most of the building were from well carved stone, only a small part of them constructed from wood – but even the wood was expensive, as it was from Bloodoak. They had never seen anything like it – in Slavyarus, most of the building were from wood, similar to longhouses. Even the Knyaz’s hall was mostly from wood, and the walls, as strong as they were, of the city of Chernomor were too wooden.

“So where do we begin?” asked Borys intentionally, knowing there was no answer – he just wanted to annoy Ragnarr for his idea.

Ragnarr Ragnarrson looked around and saw what he was looking for. “From here.”

He got off his horse, held its reins and approached a regular guard (who was in fact well armored and well equipped, nearly looking as if he was there just for the looks) at his stations.

“Storms and Honour! Can you tell me where I can find the ones of the house of Septim?”

The guard laughed lowly before answering. “Ah, looking for the royal family? Well, with no surprise, in the tallest structure in Cidel – The Spear Tower. Right ahead. But I doubt they’ll accept the likes of you.”

Ragnarr nodded in a “thanks” and mounted his horse again. They continued their way through the crowded streets, passing by lively squares, plazas, fountains and parks, great temples to old and ancient Gods and marvelous residences, before finally reaching what seemed to be the citadel of Cidel, or as the guard said, the Spear Tower – and it did look like a spear: taller than anything they have seen, more majestic than anything they had imagined and as beautiful as their beloved back at Slavyarus.

Dusk was battling with light over the skies, as the night invaded into the world, leaving the city to be lit with only torches, as the sun had yielded to the dark. They reached the bar gates, as the ironwood ones where wide open, since the city was not under siege. Through it they saw a military drill of a platoon of well armored warriors, lead by a single man, who wielded his sword with great swiftness and deadliness.

“Hey, where do you think you are going, eh?” They were stopped by the six guards, who had their spears pointed straight at then. “Think this is your own home or something? This is where the Lords live!”

Ragnarr, Borys, Wulfhere and Alexi dismounted. Ragnarrson approached the guard as much as the iron-tipped spear allowed him.

“Listen, I have travelled over the raging seas to come here and speak to the one called Septim!”

The guards laughed. “Just get the hell out of here and we will forget the whole thing, it’s for your own good.”

“Listen! I am Ragnarr Ragnarrson of the Stormguards, Lords of the North!”

“Come on, get a move on!” the guards now had serious faces and started pushing them away from the gates with their spear-shafts.

“Guards, stop. Open the gates and let them in,” a voice full of authority and might spoke.

The troops turned round and immediately went to lift the iron gates, obeying the orders of the one who led the drills, obviously a commander of some sort.

The four reluctantly approached the figure.

“Did you say Ragnarr Ragnarrson of the Stormguards?” it asked.

“I did.” Ragnarr answered coldly.

“May I see your sword?” the commander said.

The northman pulled out his greatsword, which used to be his fathers, which was given to him after his death by Keldwind, and handed it to the commander, who examined the hilt, that had a carved wolf’s head. He nodded.

“I am Validus Septim. Come with me.”

 

[ More to come soon. ]


23:13:01 Jun 12th 08 - Prince Bertilius Septim II:

:-D


21:03:53 Jun 13th 08 - Lord Ragnarr:

[ Well, thank the gods it is an old friend like Septim, otherwise no one would read this, it's just too much to even bother. Next post is coming up soon, sorry for the delay. ]


21:07:12 Jun 13th 08 - Mr. Might The God of Cows:

[I read it. More please!]


21:15:11 Jun 13th 08 - Sir Ernie The Orange:

[Moooore]


21:43:46 Jun 13th 08 - Lord Erunion Telcontar:

Great work Ragnarr! Keep it up.


21:55:03 Jun 13th 08 - Lord Ragnarr:

“Heavens, you look exactly like your father!” spoke Gaius Septim II, who was King of Cidel and ruler of the Cidellian Kingdom, the other mightiest power from the remains of the old Sellenian along with the Mullendor Kingdom – destroyer of the north. Gaius was now around fifty years or more, but was still strong and had an aura of authority. His hair was partially grey-to-white, but he seemed to be energetic and strong willed as steel.

So this is my father’s great friend, Ragnarr Ragnarrson thought.

“I am sorry for all you have gone through. I know my words will sound weak to your suffering.” King Gaius Septim II stood up from his throne. “Your father was a true friend of mine, and that is why we shall be true friends as well. The house of Septim will always support the house of Stormguard.” He now spoke carefully and with a tone of tiredness: “But, because of this damned war, the Cidellian armies are too busy holding ground and protecting this kingdom against Mullendor. There was nothing we could do to prevent them from burning the Northern Kingdom. And that is what brings me grief the most – the fact that there was nothing we could have done!” His last words had a high, angry tone, but he then calmed down and sat again on his majestic throne.

“I understand, Lord. This should not be a burden on your heart.” Ragnarr replied, but King Septim raised his hand and smiled.

“Please, don’t call me lord. You are from a noble blood as well, and you are technically the Lord of the North now. Just call me Gaius, or Septim, as your father did.”

Ragnarr nodded. “Validus told you how I survived the burning down of my home and where I have lived my whole life?”

“He did. Slavyarus – good lands, fertile and full with good people. You grew up well. You were lucky that Keldwind got you out of your fatherland. They would have slaughtered you as an infant, and now you have the chance to avenge for your people. Cidel will help you.”

“Thank you, Septim.” Ragnarr said.

“Validus here, my son, could help you more than me, though – I have to remain here in my lands and protect them against the invaders – it takes a full devotion.”

Validus Septim, who was by now standing next to Ragnarr, nodded and grabbed Ragnarr’s hand to shake, smiling. “As our fathers were friends, so shall we be.”

Ragnarr too smiled (or at least had a shadow of a smile, as the Stormguards were known to show little emotions). “I am honoured. I was planning to sail to the North and go to the few towns that survived. There maybe I could raise the people to a liberational war.”

Validus nodded slowly, deep in thoughts. “You will need help to pass the naval blockades around the Northern lands – Mullendor has a tight grip around those lands. I will help you pass, but I am afraid I shall then have to come back here to defend mu homeland. But that will not be all you shall see of me – I promise you I shall come to your aid as soon as I can.”

After long talking with King Gaius Septim II, Ragnarr Ragnarrson bid him farewell and good health and thanked him for everything before leaving the marvelous throne room along with Validus Septim, who, along with an escort (and Ragnarr’s men), went with him to the docks to see the Nordvarg.

 

[ More to come soon. And thanks, everyone! ]


21:59:02 Jun 13th 08 - Sir Ernie The Orange:

[9.61781/10] ☺


22:01:18 Jun 13th 08 - Prince Bertilius Septim II:

:-D

Nice, I have a majestic throne! WOOT! Anyways, nice story.


22:35:20 Jun 13th 08 - Mr. Might The God of Cows:

[Are you going to put everyone into your story?]


23:10:03 Jun 13th 08 - Prince Bertilius Septim II:

[[OOC: I wrote a story with him a long time ago, this is a sequel, that's the only reason I'm in it...]]


15:20:22 Jun 16th 08 - Lord Ragnarr:

“She’s a marvel. I guess she sails as good as she looks.” Spoke Validus Septim as he was looking at the Nordvarg, still docked at Cidel’s port.

“Oh, you can count on that. She’s a dragon that flies above the sea waves,” replied Ragnarr with a smile.

After a moment of silence, Validus spoke: “I will sail with you to the seas around the Northern lands, were the naval blockade of Mullendor is. I will come with my own flagship and another three of the fastest sea demons we have at port. We will lure them out when I will continue distracting them away from the blockade and you will continue through, using your speed and agility. I hope it works.”

“It sounds good enough to try it.”

The four days of the longship’s stay were soon over and it was time to leave. All of the crew made it back on board, and Guthorm and Ivan had taken care that the longship was resupplied for another long journey, both with provisions and weapons. The Nordvarg left the Cidellian port in the early morning, while the sun had not yet entirely risen in the sky. The wind was favorable, but not strong enough, so they would sail slower than intended. Ragnarr’s longship left the protected area of the harbor and let the sail loose, so they could wait for Validus Septim’s ships.

They came out of the port a few moments later. Septim’s flagship, the Augusta, was first. She was one of her kind, being a mix both from a fast caravel and a galley, and was fast even in the weak wind. Her sails were white, with the large coat of arms of the house of Septim on the main sail. The three ships behind the flagship were fast galleys, the Avenger, the Winged Courage and the Blue Demon. All four ships quickly caught up with the longship Nordvarg and set sail at a north-northeaster course.

Two weeks of changing weather passed before they caught sight of both Northern land - now all green since it was the end of spring – and the Mullendor naval blockade. It was dusk when the four ships approached a patrol of three heavy galleys, which were fortresses on water, equipped with a catapult each, but heavy, slow and clumsy in steering. In the far distances of the northwest and southeast, more lights were visible, showing an unclear number of ships still patrolling the waters.

Ragnarr Ragnarrson’s longship was very close to the Augusta, and he could speak in a low voice to Septim, who would understand him.

“This is it, Validus,” he said.

Septim nodded. “We’ll engage them, you’ll be on their southern side, and while we’re luring them farther into the sea, you slip in through the blockade. Good luck.”

“You too. I won’t forget this.”

The ships prepared for battle and made maximum speed towards the heavy galleys silently. It was only when they were over a kilometer away from them when they saw them. Alarmed shouts were heard on board the war vessels in the southern tongue, and sailors could be seen running to their stations.

Septim’s four ships passed in front of the bows of the three galleys, shooting flaming arrows at the three southern ships, being too fast to be hit by the catapult projectiles of the patrol. The Nordvarg sailed behind their sterns and did the same, making the commanders’ decks of two of them catch flames. Their attack was too quick for the southerners. The longship made a quick turn and did another run, shooting flaming arrows at the galleys, while Septim’s ships had turned around and started skirmishing, trying to lure the galleys into deeper sea. And he managed to.

But not quite.

Two of the heavy galleys started a pursuit after the Augusta, Blue Demon, Winged Courage and Avenger, while the third one was after Ragnarr’s longship. There was nothing Septim could do, as if he sailed to help Ragnarr, his ships would get directly engaged by the heavy sea fortresses of Mullendor, and he did not want to risk losing his men’s lives.

The longship was much quicker than the heavy galley and it made good speed towards the land. The distant lights were now approaching – reinforcements were on the way to secure the area, so Ragnarr needed all the speed he could get.

“Loosen the starboard side of the sail, damn it! On the oars, now!”

The sailors rushed to their positions at the oars and started rowing with great force, increasing the speed of the longship. The distance between the Nordvarg and the heavy galley behind them was increasing. Their pursuers fired a few catapult projectiles at them, which turned out useless, as they slashed into the water behind the longship. The sailors were now cheering while rowing.

Soon the heavy galley was only a few lights in the darkness behind them, and the land was closer than ever. Ragnarr had studied his father’s maps carefully and found a large enough river to reach to Stormpeak, one of the few remaining cities in the North. The river was wide and went right through the town. In fact a sleeve of this river passed through Stormguard, the capital itself, but its ruins were probably heavily guarded by southerners.

The longship headed towards the wide outflow of the river…


17:49:15 Jun 16th 08 - Sir Ernie The Orange:

[☺]


17:54:57 Jun 16th 08 - Lord Erunion Telcontar:

{It is good!}


18:18:32 Jun 16th 08 - Prince Bertilius Septim II:

[[OOC: Nice!]]


19:02:35 Jun 16th 08 - Lord Ragnarr:

[ Arrr, I forgot to add: More to come soon. ]


10:52:52 Jun 18th 08 - Lord Ragnarr:

Frusenflod was a wide river, enough for four ships to sail on it flanking each other. Once this river was important for traders and merchants and knaars were sailing here all the time, directed at different cities and towns, both in this realm and outside it. On both sides of the river, large, green, pine forests were situated, carrying the scent of fresh forest above the river. The sun rays were lively falling through the leaves onto the ground and the water, making wondrous light shapes and flashes.

The longship Nordvarg had been sailing against the river’s flow, deeper into the Northern realm, for three days, and no one had spotted them. The flow was not weak, and the wind was not as in the open sea, so they mostly relayed on oars.

But Ragnarr Ragnarrson was getting nervous – in accordance with his father’s old maps, they should be passing by the town of Hafenburg – trader’s centre and stop on the way out into the sea. What would the city be like – ruins of his father’s work? Or would there still be people there, from the occupators? The river ahead seemed straight, and no bends and curves meant that they could not hide if they saw that the city was not favorable to pass by. They could pass by it at night, but beaching the longship in unknown, probably occupied by southern troops territory was not a good idea, as they always had chances on water and when moving, rather than beached, exposed and venerable.

“Ragnarr, smoke ahead.” Spoke Borys, looking forward towards the horizon before them. They were getting closer and closer.

“In case of anything, have your weapons close by you.” Ragnarr spoke so the whole crew could hear him.

The longship was close enough so that the town was starting to be visible. Ragnarr had the feeling his heart instantly became into a heavy stone – the town, or what was left of it, was pitiful. Charred ruins of something once great. What was left of the old docks was only one space for a ship, and close by it the only structure that survived, a storehouse. There was a ship right now at dock there, and it seemed there was no trouble now...

Until they got so close it was too late. It was now visible that a whole battalion of a Mullendor army had camped here, and now a band of troops were standing on the dock, waving hands at them, showing them to come closer. Some others rushed to the galley at port there.

“Damn it! Hide half the oars, we can’t be merchants and be so many! And everyone not on oars, cover yourselves up!” Ragnarr said this quietly, but everyone heard, since there was a heavy silence on board now.

After the men did what they were told, it seemed the crew was only by thirty men – reasonable for a merchant vessel. The galley was now in the middle of the river, blocking it, leaving only a small space to pass through, in front of its bow.

“Direct your ship towards us for inspection!” one of the troops, with a few feathers on top his iron half helm was yelling in the common tongue.

The longship headed slowly towards the galley’s board. Soon only a meter stood between both of them. A band of twelve troops got on board, one of them with the feathers on his half helm, indicating a higher post. They were all in ring mail armor, with red Mullendor capes and with a short sword each.

Ragnarr had left the rudder oar to Borys and headed towards the troops. He had covered himself in a black robe, but his face was still clear to see.

“What is your purpose here, scum?” asked the commander, obviously understood that this ship is northern and that most of the crew look northern.

“Trading, sir. We’re headed towards Stormguard to sell…” Ragnarr’s words were interrupted.

“We were told the naval blockade was broken and that a longship similar to yours has passed. I shall not even ask permission from you to check through this garbage here, so stay away and you shall not get whipped, swine.”

Ragnarr was holding his anger inside him by know, but this just went over. He grabbed the commander’s throat with his both hands and started choking him. His surprised mixture of choking and screaming out commands made the other troops run onto Ragnarr, but by then the whole crew, both hidden and unhidden had raised swords against the troops. Five were killed instantly and the others were thrown over board. The commander was dead after Ragnarr’s rage and his body was too thrown in the water.

“On the damned oars!” Ragnarr was now yelling. They had to pass this place quickly now, as the troops on shore had understood something was wrong and were running to board the galley.

“Throw a torch in that ship, we don’t want it following!”

The galley was soon in flames and the Nordvarg was making its way quickly towards the north-west against the river’s flow, leaving behind a burning wreckage and an alarmed garrison of troops, who could do nothing.

 

[ More to come soon. ]


13:33:23 Jun 18th 08 - Sir Ernie The Orange:

[Another good one☺]


21:55:23 Jun 18th 08 - Lord Ragnarr:

[ By the way, just before posting the next one, I want to recommend a series of books to all who like my works - The Saxon Stories (for now only 4 books: The Last Kingdom, The Pale Horseman, The Lords of the North, Sword Song - really great and helped me both with writing style and creativity. The books are about danes, norsemen and saxons (+welsh) during the reign of Alfred the Great, at the time of the greatest Danish attacks of England. Great books, if you can, get them somehow and read them. ]


13:08:42 Jun 23rd 08 - Lord Ragnarr:

Nordvarg continued on its way against the flow until dusk, throughout the whole night and on the early morning they had reached where Herreflod, the river that flowed through the ruined capital of the North, Stormguard, flowed into Frusenflod in a fork.

Ragnarr was tempted to go to his father’s old capital and just slay all of the invaders there, at the moment. But that would be blind rage, leading to nothing but death – not even honour, as he would kill the whole crew along with himself.

After three hours they encountered danger. In the distance, the smoke of Stormpeak was seen – the remaining city under siege, the single bastion of Northerners left. The river was blocked by an improvised barrier of floating rafts, on top which was a small palisade. The structure was weak, but strong enough to hold off ships from passing. Or at least from that side of the river.

It was flanked by two wooden towers. And just beyond were the river gates of Stormguard, part of the mighty stone wall surrounding the city, protected by Northerners. The city’s north and west side were protected by cliffs and mountains, so only the southern and eastern sides were besieged and surrounded by a camp. At the moment, it seemed that both forces were resting from another siege assault, unsuccessful for Mullendor, but equally exhausting and bloody for both sides. Ladders, broken and abandoned, lay under the stone walls, beside lifeless bodies of attackers and defenders. A burning siege tower was collapsing as they were approaching, and the smoke created a black atmosphere above the city, and the heavy clouds in the sky which gathered during the night contributed to this. It seemed that it would break out into heavy rain any moment now.

“Oars, full speed. Put some pressure on that sail, we need all the wind we can get now.”

Borys stopped suddenly when he heard the command. He turned to Ragnarr, who was looking straight at the wooden blockade ahead of them.

“Wait, we can’t pass,…” he said nervously.

“The blockade was meant to stop ships from coming out of the city, but not protecting the rear. Let’s just hope it’s weaker on this side and that we can pass…”

As the longship got closer, alarmed calls aroused from the besieger’s camp, and a band of troops ran to the shore. They were reloading their crossbows to fire at the Nordvarg, which was gaining speed and heading straight for the blockade. Ragnarr was gripping the rudder oars with one hand and his charm around his neck with the other.

Then a crash and splintering wood was heard, tension of planks and creaking of bending wood. The longship had passed through the wooden blockade like a butcher’s knife through soft meat.

“Yaaaaahr!” Borys and many others cheered their victory over the odds.

“Embark here! Prepare for a land attack!” Ragnarr commanded. He was hoping that if he attacked the besieger’s camp after an exhausting attack by surprise, the garrison of Stormpeak would rush out of the citadel through the gates to help him.

The sails were loosened and the oars brought back inside, and gently, the Nordvarg scraped the river bed at its shallow shore and stopped slowly.

“Shield wall in front of the ship, after me!”

The sailors jumped overboard onto ground with armor, shields, axes, swords, helms and battle cries and formed a loose shield wall, with Ragnarr in its middle. His greatsword was in its sheath and he was holding a normal, yet well forged broad sword, which was more for stabbing than slashing, since combat in shield walls did not allows such great freedom of movement.

The sailors, in their loose shield wall formation ran through the camp’s tents and towers forward towards the regrouping enemy warriors, who were both tired from the siege and shocked by the sudden, bold attack by the northerners. They had formed three battle lines, but were still unorganized and confused.

The shield wall bashed into their formation with a great “thump” of the shields on both sides crashing. Then there was yelling of rage, rattle of ring mail armor and clash of weapons. The northerners’ attack was perfect, but their shield wall was short and was easily flanked by troops, now more in their numbers and better coordinated by their captains and commanders. The shield wall was bending and curving like a semi-circle to protect its flanks.

Ragnarr was blocking another attack and stabbed the attacker’s flesh blindly from under the shield. He felt sticky blood running down onto his hand and heard the cry of pain of the other as he fell to the ground. The northerner then made a pace back, luring an enemy to think that the shield wall is giving away, but then made a sudden attack again and another warrior fell dead.

Soon after the bold attack the besiegers softened their attacks. After a few moments, they were throwing their shields to the ground and running in the opposite direction, towards the woods. It was then when Ragnarr understood that the garrison of Stormpeak had charged the enemy formation in the rear and thus, defeated them. The besiegers were running away from their camp, leaving all behind.

The heavy clouds broke out into heavy rain.

Ragnarr’s warriors were tired and as soon as the enemy was beaten away from the camp, they stumbled to the longship and rested, throwing off their heavy armor and weapons. Seven had died today.

Ragnarr Ragnarrson was cleaning his blooded blade when someone approached him and started speaking to him.

“I don’t know who you are, but if you had not made those bloody southerners concentrate entirely on you, thus leaving themselves exposed to our attack, this siege would have continued much longer…Gods, who are you?” the man’s voice was now shaking, as Ragnarr had turned towards him. “Lord Stormguard?!”

“I am Ragnarr Ragnarrson of the Stormguards.”


[ More to come soon. ]


17:43:44 Jun 23rd 08 - Sir Ernie The Orange:

[Nice!]


14:33:03 Jun 25th 08 - Lord Ragnarr:

The dead northmen, who died defending Stormpeak during the siege and during the assault on the camp, were gathered and given a decent burial, being burnt on top stone “ships” in the forest north of Stormpeak with their weapons in their hands. The remains were covered in stone and earth, on top which a stone with runes was placed, telling about the bravery of the dead ones.

After that was done, the abandoned camp was pillaged and by nightfall nothing remained around the city but grass and dirt. Major repairs would start on the city on the following morning, but foraging parties were sent out to search for crops and food, as Stormpeak was a starving city during the siege, which ended only that day.

Once the longship was docked in the river port inside the city, the sailors scattered off to find places to sleep over or help the ones recently besieged. Ragnarr and Borys went to the citadel, which was a great hall, both from wood and stone, with a tower at the end, which was part of the defenses of the city. On their way, people gathered around them and thanked them, each in their own way – whether it was a tap on the shoulder, a bear hug or words of gratefulness, Stormpeak thanked Ragnarr, who accepted it all with a wide smile.

Once they entered the great hall, they were greeted by Earl Bolverk and lesser jarls (note that it is pronounced “yarl”), who had held Stormpeak during twenty years of siege. They looked exhausted, but more than joyous to see Ragnarr Ragnarrson.

“Lord Ragnarr! Gods, you look just like your father!” Earl Bolverk was obviously amazed. In fact, he had been young and strong during Ragnarrson’s father’s reign, around twenty-five, but he was one of the few to continue the fight and protect Stormpeak. Now he was twenty years older, with red hair turning gray, and a face of a person who had lived under great restrictions for two decades. “There were rumors that the heir was alive, and somewhere to the east, but so little could be understood from behind these stone walls with an enemy on the other side. We don’t even know how the war is going on out there…”

“I’ll tell you all over a few horns of mead. I hope that that had not finished off during the siege?”

The earl laughed. “We have so much of it, we were living on it!”

All through the sunset, the rainy night and the wet early morning, Ragnarr and Borys lively explained about how Ragnarr Ragnarrson survived, where was he and what he did. They also described their visit to Cidel and the journey through the naval blockade and the river. Apart from that, Ragnarr learned about the struggles of the ones under siege and how they survived.

“I swear, if it was not the river, as little fish as it provides, we would all be dead by now…” spoke Bolverk after finishing another horn of mead.

The sun, partially hidden by clouds, rose above Stormpeak. The city was booming with activity now – carts entered, carrying food, grain and other supplies. Scouting parties left the city to study the land around and see where the enemies had gone. Work had begun on the walls, repairing them and making them ready for another attack. Houses where restored and granaries refilled. Even weapon production had begun, although not much was left of the men who could wield a sword well. There were around seventy thousand people in the city at the beginning of the siege, of which at least one tenth, consisting of fighting men, was now dead. That left around seven thousand warriors and another seven thousand, unskilled and untrained men. There were many orphans and widows, as one third of the male population was no more. Many of the women, over the long years of siege, were now skilled in archery.

Ragnarr woke up at midday, with a splitting headache, finding himself in some small chamber on a fur covered bed. He did not remember how he got here, but he assumed that at the final stages of the feast (or rather the hard drinking), he got to a room and fell asleep. Ragnarr washed his face, combed his straight long hair (it was a strange trait of most northerners to keep their hair in perfect condition), placed on his ring mail shirt, took his belongings – namely, his sword – and left the great hall. He headed towards the river docks to inspect his longship and crew, and to await the scouting parties’ reports, since their future actions depended on their knowledge of the Mullendor forces’ positions.

[ More to come soon. ]


18:59:56 Jun 25th 08 - Sir Ernie The Orange:

[Good job!]


20:22:59 Jun 25th 08 - Lord Ragnarr:

[ Hey, thanks Ernest (: ]


14:14:15 Aug 29th 08 - Duke Ragnarr:

[ I'm back from Austria, so now I can continue. I'm glad to see this topic is still here, I've been away for a long time...]

 

Two months passed since the liberation of Stormpeak. The walls were restored and the city had its repairs, and the granaries were full again from grain, stolen from nearby Mullendorian camps, raided at night. It was too late to make a harvest for the winter, so the people were going to spend another winter feeding upon fish…and stolen grain.

On the square of the Forth Wind, close to the river docks, dozens of carts lined up to empty their contents in the grain houses and stores. Cranes were lifting loads, ropes were tensioned, men swore, and the city was full of life, though its fate was still on the balance.

Though Ragnarr had tilted the balance more on his side – a system of watchtowers, cunningly hidden in the local wilderness, at a radius of ten kilometers from the city was established to report of any approaching armies. They had proven useful once, as three weeks after the liberation, around a thousand troops were coming this way, all on horseback, probably with orders to ensue chaos in the surroundings – but the watchtowers had reported to Stormpeak and soon an ambush was quickly set to the raiders, leaving only a third to ride back, with their tails between their legs.

Ragnarr Ragnarrson was proud of himself. He was restoring his father’s kingdom that had to be his own. Yet he did this more of the family’s good name and honor rather than his own wellbeing.

He was over a map of the former kingdom of the North, with many new scribbles on it, making it accurate for today’s hard times, and had several figures on it. A small swordsman, leaning on his weapon, made from wood, representing his own forces, little representations of the towns as towers, made too from wood, and at least five other wooden figures, painted in red, to represent the occupying forces of Mullendor. The Earl of Stormpeak, Bolverk, and the other yarls, were discussing on which city should they march onto to liberate.

“If we march with our forces to take back Stormguard, the capital, then surely the whole land will stand up and rise against Mullendor!” a young Yarl spoke with fire in his eyes, obviously blinded by his thirst for more victories.

“Do you hear yourself? Attack Stormguard? With the little forces we have? All we can summon to the battlefield is around three thousand warriors and another six thousand unskilled men! Do you know what forces Mullendor has? Do you?” the Earl’s response was bitter.

There was much arguing among the yarls, but Ragnarr remained distant to it, studying the map carefully. Finally, he spoke:

“Mullendor clearly outnumbers us, but his forces are scattered among the lands, trying to keep them from rising against his rule. If we take a small force of five thousand men, of whom a thousand are on horseback, then we could the surroundings of the closest to us cities – Stormkeep - the main Northern port, and Rurikhof, the town to the south of here, known for its strategic place. After these raids, the people will understand the time has come, and will rise. Then we will strike hard on the cities and restore them to the Northern Kingdom.”

The Earl and Yarls nodded silently in agreement. “I shall inform my captains of this,” said Earl Bolverk, “but who shall stay here and protect Stormkeep?”

Ragnarr grinned. “Well, you.”

“Ragnarr, Lord, I have rotted in these halls for twenty years! I lounge for a real battle out of these walls!”

Ragnarr kept silent for a moment. “Then you shall come with me on the raids. Yarl Erik, Yarl Bjorn and Yarl Uhtred, you shall share the city’s command between you. The other yarls will have to listen to your commands.” The three Yarls had stood up a bit straighter, with smirks on their faces. “And tomorrow, we shall make our first raid! Make that known, prepare the men, and make ready any needed supplies. That is all, lords. I shall now leave you so I can attend to my crew.” Ragnarr took the small book by the map he had made notes in and left the hall, with the yarls rushing to attend to their assignments.

Ragnarr hurried his way through the crowd at the docks, and boarded his longship in broad steps.

“On the morrow I shall lead a raiding army to ensue chaos to Mullendor.”

“Is that so? Well, if the ship had legs, we’d be able to follow you!” Borys smiled.

Ragnarr envied his friend’s skill to make the best of joy in any situation. “You don’t have to do any of that, you can ride a horse, right?” Ragnarr looked towards Guthorm and Ivan – his leading warriors, who had approached to hear their commander’s words. “You two, you shall be in charge while we’re gone. The crew shall stay here as well, so report to Yarls Erik, Bjorn and Uhtred.”

The two nodded. “We shall, Ragnarr.”

The sun was lazily falling to the darkness of the night, and eventually it was entirely engulfed by clouds and blackness.

 

[ Await more soon.][ This piece was written while listening to Apocalyptica, a proper inspiration. ]


15:22:05 Aug 29th 08 - Sir Revenge:

Wow!

Ragnar!!! <3333333333333333333333333333333


19:34:17 Aug 29th 08 - Sir Charley Statler:

[[Yay! a return!]]


22:52:05 Aug 29th 08 - Duke Ragnarr:

[ Hey, good to see you people are still here. ]

 

A long stretch of Mullendorian troops was making its way through the mountain pass, located between Stormkeep, the main Northern port and the old capital of Stormguard, which now lay in ruins, merely a reminder of the kingdom that once was here. The column of troops was only three troops wide, since the path only allowed that much. On one side of the pass was a steep slope downwards to a stream, which rumbled melodically. On the other side was cliffy wilderness, nearly impossible to go through.

But if one was on top those cliffs, it was a different story. The ones above could easily aim at the unfortunate ones below and make them arrow fodder. That seemed to make the column of troops that was escorting Lord Gregory uneasy.

They had a reason to be. A very good one, as a matter of fact.

A volley of arrows appeared from the sky and crashed into the ranks, tearing them apart. Suddenly, all discipline was gone and everyone were looking for a way out of the trap. Many fell to their death in the pushing, panicked crowd that was rushing its way forward.

“Bloody fools! Regroup you dogs!” Lord Gregory took out his sword and raised it above his head. “Regroup!”

A dozen armored noble warriors, or knights, had surrounded him protectively, but no one else listened. The recent raids from the Northern rebels of Stormpeak had lowered morale to the very minimum and all were ready just to flee to the south, towards their own kingdom.

Before anyone heard the heavy gallop, from both sides of the path came mounted northerners with raised swords. They stopped before the ambushed ones, leaving them no escape route.

“What are we to make of you, Lord Gregory?” asked one of the Northerners, a tall man with pale blonde hair, neatly trimmed beard and moustaches and coldly blue eyes. He seemed to be their leader.

The southern lord hesitated. ”I surrender my sword to you, sir.” He swallowed his pride to save his men. “I’m sure my king would pay a ransom for my release.” He was sweating under his iron helm, which only let his eyes be seen, and slightly muffled his speech up.

The northerner laughed. “I’m sure he would, sir. However, it is not the ransom we want. In fact, we have no interest in money at all.”

Gregory’s heart was beating quickly.

“I see that you have no will to fight. I see that you surrender. But what I also see is my lands devastated, old cities ruined, burnt temples, hanged men who protected what was theirs, who defended themselves, who had pride in them. I have not passed through not one single town were the woman were not violated. What do you expect me to do?” Ragnarr was now serious and his smile was gone.

Lord Gregory knew that in every invasion these things happened. It was nothing he could control, though he knew some commanders in his ranks that encouraged these kinds of things.

“Give me your honest word of a noble that you shall leave this land with all the men you command. Swear it by honor of your title.”

“I swear it.” Gregory removed his iron helm. “I give you my word.” His tone was bitter, but also sounded defeated and broken.

“Let them pass.” The northerners made way for the ambushed troops to pass through, back towards Stormkeep, from where they came, and would, as they said they would, make their way back towards Mullendor.

When the column was out of sight, Borys looked at Ragnarr critically. “You really think they are going to keep their word?”

Ragnarr looked back coldly. “I could not kill a surrendered, broken foe. I cannot do it. It is not right.”

“Is it right half the women of your own people to be raped by these southern b a s t a r d s?”

There was heavy silence. It remained so during their whole journey back to Stormpeak.

 

[More to come soon. ]


23:14:36 Aug 29th 08 - Sir Charley Statler:

[[Rev isnt really here...he is a grump and needs to be more active on here.  Comon Rev!!! <3333333333333]]


23:16:09 Aug 29th 08 - Sir Revenge:

[ Rag, I think you should give Stormborn a bump ;D ]


23:18:45 Aug 29th 08 - Sir Charley Statler:

[[I would join for sure...but it depends on if we can TRULY bring it back...to its former glory...]]


06:38:23 Aug 30th 08 - Sir Revenge:

[ You were never in it ;D ]


14:46:47 Aug 30th 08 - Duke Ragnarr:

[ Sorry people, but I really think the Stormborn had its glory and any continuation would just be like making a stupid continuation of a good movie for more money. Even if I do start a Stormborn thread, some time will pass till I do - I got to think up of the storyline first. You have no idea how much time I spent on thinking up the storyline of the first one. At the end of it I was getting sloppy and just passed through quickly since activity was at a minimum and there was this prick who was *beep*ming some sci-fi stuff.]
[ Wow, is the s-word censored? .... ]


21:32:53 Aug 30th 08 - Sir Charley Statler:

Sir Revenge

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8/30/2008 1:38:23 AM

[ You were never in it ;D ]

Yes I was you tool >_> I was in like 2-3(except the third ended it)

Yes Ragnarr....the sp- to the -a- to the -m word is banned >_>


04:56:55 Sep 1st 08 - Sir Jonny Bacardi The Last Paladin:

well done ragnarr. And yea, I was in the first one, but never got back into the other ones as much. I'd sign back up for a new one. Keep up the story by the way, very well done.


12:24:05 Sep 1st 08 - Sir Ice Ice Baby Ice:

I was in the first one, Rawr


19:17:51 Sep 1st 08 - Sir Charley Deallus:

Old name? XD


23:44:29 Sep 1st 08 - Prince Tiber Septim IV:

Game and Watch!?


18:33:00 Sep 2nd 08 - Duke Ragnarr:

It was night time, and dark as it was, the clouds made the night heavy and unclear, as the moon was concealed. It was raining lightly, giving the air a freshness and coldness that made one feel lively.

The Mullendorian camp north from Rurikhof was at its usual state – cautious guards at the four gates, slow patrols along the palisade, all lit up by torches. The watches were doubled, since recently heavy rebel activity was raging across these lands almost four months now. Patrols were ambushed, camps burnt, supplies cut off, escorts captured, and such. These were no common brigands, thought Lord Henreys – commander of the camp, since no money was stolen and none was wanted as ransom. There were rumors that Lord Ragnarr Stormguard had risen from the dead and is now avenging for his ruined fatherland. Others said his son, Ragnarr Ragnarrson came from the eastern lands of Slavyarus to restore the Northern Kingdom. Yet others claimed that the northerners had had enough of the tyranny. Whatever it was, they might attack the camp, and that is why all watches were doubled, ale rations were halved and drills were the constant, brutal reality of the troops.

Two months ago, Lord Gregory of Trothport had passed through the camp coming from the north. He looked broken and had no will neither to talk, nor to fight. All Henreys had understood was Lord Gregory was leading his troops back home. That had clearly broken morale in the fort, and Henreys was obliged to enforce discipline once again with his demonstrations. What he did was take five men and five women from the local populace and hang them before the troops after a long speech, full of hatred, encouragement and call for battle. It seemed to work.

Henreys nodded to himself. Even if it did not work, tough.

He leaned on his wooden chair and looked at the map before him once again. He dismissed it from his concerns, as he had studied it the whole day, planning his small punishing campaign to the rebels, assigned to him by Lord, or no, rather King Kaeso of Mullendor, son of Ballaron. The king was his father’s son – arrogant and despotic. He had dismissed the council of nobles in his kingdom immediately after the crown touched his head. The people loved him though for his conquest and often held games and tournaments, though he occasionally showed his wrath upon his own people by various ways when times were hard. For what is sure, the people lived in fear, but did not hate their king.

Henreys rolled up the map before him and placed it away, and placed a bottle of fine red Trothport wine before him, along with a crystal glass. He took out a well-kept book, which was entitled “Conquest”, a journal of Henreys’s military and subjective actions in the long years of war and occupation over the old kingdom that was no more. He opened it at where he last wrote and prepared his ink and pen, when alarming bells were heard ringing monotonously and loud.

“Lord, enemy activity spotted on the western side of the fort!” said the knight who had rushed into Henreys’s luxury tent almost as soon as the alarm went among the camp.

Henreys stood up immediately, flipping over the table before him, and shouted out: “Get me my armor!”

Four pages rushed in and started equipping their lord with padded leather, ring male armor and heavy plate. He took his beautifully decorated helm under his arm and rushed out of the tent, following the knight to the western side of the fort. There, they climbed up on the palisade and made their way through the tight packs of archers, gathered there, ready to do their duty to their lord.

What Henreys saw was merely rabble – a pitiful pack of warriors, not more than a thousand or so, gathered a few kilometers away from the walls. Only the torches of the northern rebels made them visible.

“Gather the knights! Mount up!” Henreys yelled.

“Lord, is it wise? It’s night and they might be more, hiding in the dark…” the young knight was cautious with his questions, but that did not save him from his lord’s bitter reply.

“Do not question commands! Since when are my troops afraid from the dark?” he was yelling. Henreys was determined to destroy the rebellious northerners here and now.

***

Ragnarr was observing from amongst the pine trees the knights shooting out from the gates. He smiled – when you knew your enemy and knew what he would do, one should be proud og himself.

 

[ More to come soon. ]


22:41:57 Sep 5th 08 - Duke Ragnarr:

The sun rose over the land. Brightness lit the fields and forests around Rurikhof. It was a place of numerous streams and falls, with flower beds and tall grass, waving from the usual gust from the sea not too far away. Tall pine trees cast deep shadows around them, under which forest life flourished. This morning, however, was not full of life, but of death.

The soil was had soaked the blood of many. Broken weapons and pieces of fine armor were scattered across the field, still covered in bodies. It was a feast for crows.

The Mullendorian camp by Rurikhof had burnt the whole night of the attack and was now in blackened ruins, though still some patches of it burnt.  Only a flag reminded that there used to be an army stationed here, just till yesterday, but only pitiful hanging rags remained from the banner.

The field was muddy from last night’s heavy rain. But the mud was red.

This scene truly terrified Lord Edwaris. He rode here as fast as he could to bring the reinforcements asked from him urgently at midnight with fire signals, and now he was here, leading two thousand mounted knights from the occupying Mullendorian garrison from Stormkeep, and he was too late.

He alone, followed by two lifeguards, continued forth through the field, leaving the speechless knights behind in silence. He rode amongst the corpses, blaming himself in his mind for all the lost lives of his own countrymen. All this could have been prevented.

He rode slowly into the field and heard a groan from below. A weak yelp, a last plead for help. Lord Edwaris quickly dismounted and looked around. A hand was reaching out for him. He grabbed it, but did not pull it, as he wanted to spare any further pain of the weak, dying man.

“Closer…” the heavily wounded managed to say. He had an eye missing, and an improvised patch over it made quickly from cloth from his tunic. Black, hardened blood and dust covered the whole left part of his face. He had a terrible wound in his chest, and Lord Edwaris was amazed the man still lived. He went on his knees to hear the knight’s last words.

“They…had placed death traps in the dark…,” he managed weakly. “The horses fell into…pits with spears…and…they rushed from amongst the trees to…to finish us…” The wounded suddenly squeezed Edwaris’s hand, afraid to leave this world, as if hoping that holding someone strongly would help. “The madman…Henreys…we only followed his orders…and his…underestimating of the rebels…has killed us all.” The man groaned with his last breath and died.

Edwaris stood up, with a face trying to hide his deep sorrow. He mounted his horse quickly, turned round and galloped back to his troops.

“We shall give our brothers a descent burial. Dismount!”

The whole day was spent on digging mass graves and filling them. The sad remains of the flag were taken back and the camp was announced abandoned. It would not be recreated. Edwaris, while overlooking the work of his troops, was deep in thoughts. This was a slaughter. So many of his own had died in the dark by an unseen cause. Horrid. He suddenly had a surge of hatred for the northern rebels. If he could, he would track them down like animals, and kill them so. But he then realized – these people were fighting for the freedom of their fatherland. He and his men were aggressors, practically. And it was Henreys’s army that charged, eager to destroy the enemies. It was not like they were killed dishonorably. They all died in battle. And what about these northerners, who were supposedly, lead by dead Ragnarr’s son, Ragnarr Ragnarrson? Was he not merely fighting for what was once his father’s, for his kingdom, for his people? Would Edwaris not do the same if his kingdom was occupied by an enemy? And why were they here anyway? To satisfy the bloody ambition of their mad king, the son of Ballaron, Kaeso?

He gave up on thoughts. If people followed commands and had no emotions, things would be much easier. When commanders thought differently from their king, they often found themselves in a very grim situation, sometimes leading to their deaths. He kept his thoughts to himself and followed orders now. They would leave when the graves were done and then hunt down the rebels.

 

[ More to come soon. ]


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